Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 3, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-24160 The implementation of a rapid sample preparation method for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in a diagnostic laboratory in South Africa PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marais, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This work is interesting and relevant for the worldwide coronavirus testing. In addition to the comments of both reviewers, with which I agree, there are a few (minor) comments that I would like to add, to further improve the quality of your manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 16 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): 1. Table 4 and the paragraph where these data are described (page 12) are not completely clear to me. Samples were serially diluted and tested in several replicates (for example 10 or 24). Testing was however for dilutions 1:20 to 1:160 and 1:320 only performed with the RSP method whereas for all other dilutions it was performed with the NA purification method. This does not allow a direct comparison of the sensitivities of the RSP and NA methods. Why were the dilutions not tested in both ways, for example 12 replicates for each dilution for both RSP and NA? 2. Please avoid starting a sentence with a number (for example in lines 161 and 200). Please rephrase these sentences. 3. Line 212: please remove 'are shown' at the end of the sentence. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscripts presents data evaluating procedures to omit the need of nucleic acaid extraction from clinical NP/OP swab samples prior to performing molecular testing for Sars-CoV-2 detection. All results for extraction free procedures are compared to established extraction method (used as gold standards). The results demonstrate that the extraction free procedure leads to some loss of analytical sensitivity, in particular for samples harbouring a low viral load (high Ct values). In general Ct values for samples without extraction are higher as compared to extracted samples. This could either be due to a reduced amplification efficiency (or even inhibition) or a smaller equivalent of the clinical sample used as input into the PCR reaction. Specific questions: 1. It would be relevant to present the Ct values of the internal control of all samples w/wo extraction listed in appendix 1 and 2, as this will give insight in the effect of (leaving out) extraction on PCR efficiency / inhibition. 2. 6 previously negative samples were left out from the analysis because the IC failed (even after repeat testing upon dilution). These samples should not have been left out from the analysis but included in table 3, because the information is very relevant in judging the appropriateness and feasbility of the extraction free protocol : The results demonstrate that PCR inhibition was present in 6/185 samples (3%). 3. Nucleic acid extraction using chaotropic agents (Guanidinium salts) result in virus inactivation (loss of infectivity). The extraction-free protocol is based on a 5 minute incubation at 98C. Did the investigators perform any experiments to study the effect of this temperature treatment on sample infectivity (bio-safety). Samples which are manipulated on a QIAgility liquid handling system, given the ‘open environment’ of such a system that lacks HEPA filtering of exhausted air, should be proven to be non-infectious 4. The authors indicate that automation of the PCR setup process significantly reduced robustness of assay performance by reducing the frequency of invalid results. This is just mentioned in the discussion without supporting data. What is menat by invalid results (PC negative / NC positive / IC negative???) and how are these data used in the manuscript (in particular in the S1 appendix)? 5. In the methods section it is described that PCR setup was don using an liquid handling system whereas in the discussion it is mentioned that manual setup was don for at least part of the experiments (and that this is caused operator dependency in the quality of the results). How did these differences in PCR setup procedures affect the overall results and conclusion on the comparison of extraction free procedures to the gold standard methods? Reviewer #2: This manuscript by Marais and co-workers describes a rapid automated sample preparation method for the detection of SARS-CoV-2. This information is important as limited availability of general nucleic acid purification reagents have impacted SARS-CoV-2 testing worldwide. There are a number of issues that need to be addressed: 1) The authors mention (lines 131-134) that if the internal control failed (ct <40) the sample was repeated with less sample input. They mention (lines 172-174) in 6 negative samples this was the case after repeat testing. They do not mention however the percentage of samples overall that failed internal control (ct<40) in the initial analysis. This is important because if this percentage is high it would mean a significant increased workload for retesting. 2) The limited availability of reagents was the main reason for this study. The authors may want to comment on availability of consumables for the QIAgility systems. 3) The authors estimate PPA (lines 193-202) based on the mean difference in Ct values between the Nuclisens and RSP method and adding these numbers to Ct values from previously determined samples. They argue that if this newly calculated Ct value was above 40 the sample would be negative if they had used the RSP method. By doing this the authors assume that the relation between the amount of RNA and the Ct value is linear over the entire range of RNA concentrations. The authors do not show this linear correlation. Especially at high Ct values this correlation is almost never linear and generally very variable. In my opinion this method cannot be used to determine the PPA of the RSP method and the authors should delete this part from the manuscript 4) Since the values from the Abbott M2000 system cannot be compared to the Ct values from the Seegene PCR due to intrinsic different analysis method I fail to see what information is added by figure 2. 5) The authors mention that the loss of analytical sensitivity of at least 8 fold was acceptable for clinical application. It is unclear however which criteria played a role in this consideration. 6) Furthermore they mention that the Seegene assay has an analytical sensitivity of 100 RNA copies/reaction with the nuclisense method (and thus > 800 c/reaction for the RSP method). This analytical sensitivity seems rather low compared to other molecular assays which are in the range of 1-50 (see below refs). This should also be taken into consideration with remark 5) Corman VM, Landt O, Kaiser M, Molenkamp R, Meijer A, Chu DK, Bleicker T, Brünink S, Schneider J, Schmidt ML, Mulders DG, Haagmans BL, van der Veer B, van den Brink S, Wijsman L, Goderski G, Romette JL, Ellis J, Zambon M, Peiris M, Goossens H, Reusken C, Koopmans MP, Drosten C. Detection of 2019 novel coronavirus (2019-nCoV) by real-time RT-PCR. Euro Surveill. 2020, Jan;25(3):2000045 van Kasteren PB, van der Veer B, van den Brink S, Wijsman L, de Jonge J, van den Brandt A, Molenkamp R, Reusken CBEM, Meijer A. Comparison of seven commercial RT-PCR diagnostic kits for COVID-19. J Clin Virol. 2020 Jul;128:104412. doi: 10.1016/j.jcv.2020.104412 Iglói Z, Leven M, Abdel-Karem Abou-Nouar Z, Weller B, Matheeussen V, Coppens J, Koopmans M, Molenkamp R. Comparison of commercial realtime reverse transcription PCR assays for the detection of SARS-CoV-2. J Clin Virol. 2020 Aug;129:104510. doi: 10.1016/j.jcv.2020.104510 ********** 6. 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Revision 1 |
PONE-D-20-24160R1 The implementation of a rapid sample preparation method for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in a diagnostic laboratory in South Africa PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marais, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. There are two minor points that will further improve the manuscript. (see below). Please submit your revised manuscript by 20 October 2020. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Sylvia Maria Bruisten, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The revised version shows good improvements in manuscript and supplementary files. Most points were answered to satisfaction. There are two (minor) points that can still improve the manuscript: 1. Table 2 is redundant since here exactly the same mixture scheme is used as in Table 1, with the difference that only 2 μl input in stead of 3 μl was used (which is compensated for by the water volume). I therefor advise to remove Table 2 and to add in the text after 'with a decreased sample volume' '2 μl in stead of 3 μl' (page 7, line 134). 2. Please replace 'greater' by 'higher' before 'mean Ct value' [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Revision 2 |
The implementation of a rapid sample preparation method for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in a diagnostic laboratory in South Africa PONE-D-20-24160R2 Dear Dr. Marais, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. This includes to re-number the Table, after the deletion of Table 2. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sylvia Maria Bruisten, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The requested last adjustments were made, but the Table numbers were not adjusted after deleting Table 2. This should be done in the final version. Then the manuscript can be fully accepted. Reviewers' comments: All adjustments were made, but the Tables need to be numbered correctly. |
Formally Accepted |
PONE-D-20-24160R2 The implementation of a rapid sample preparation method for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in a diagnostic laboratory in South Africa Dear Dr. Marais: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Sylvia Maria Bruisten Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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