Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-16251 Trends in de-lousing of Norwegian farmed salmon from 2000-2019 – consumption of medicines, salmon louse resistance and non-medicinal control methods PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Myhre Jensen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The paper is of interest for a wide audience of stakeholders and deserves publication. However, it needs a style revision according to the comments of the reviewers. Please consider all the reveiwers' comments during the manuscript revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 20 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall this is a worthwhile study and a significant quantity of work seems to have been done using archive data. I have made many small suggestions which at first sight, may appear to be major revision, but are mainly stylistic or done to improve understanding. Main concern is that the Discussion needs some redrafting (see below). I think there is a difference between the approach used compared to Overton et al 2019, but nevertheless it would be a good paper to read. I wish you all the best with publication and hope the details below are of some assistance. …………….. Abstract – overall would benefit from inserting some key data or figures from the overall paper. L17 – Only Norway mentioned, of course the topic of the paper, however at the start of the Introduction mentioning that it is an international issue and associated global costs would increase the importance of the paper. L20 – Norwegian Food Safety Authority (in capitals?) Check referencing of websites and date accessed, especially in a paper that uses numbered references, do they need to be detailed at the end of the paper (?) L52 and 76 – use abbreviations after first use alongside full names, then use abbreviations thereafter? L63 – dominant L64 – reference required / link to following reference L78 – provide a specific year L79 – in number…is this the application incidence, number of fish treated? Make this a little clearer. L83 to 85 – I think Thermolicers are a technique rather than a brand name, perhaps use this here. “Lice lasers” may need to be explained a little more (and efficacy has been questioned recently, see Bui et al., 2020) so ensure the list of non-medicinal approaches is complete, correctly named and fully but briefly explained. Why are other approaches dismissed – is it because they are management tactics or physical separation methods that are not recorded or difficult to quantify? L88 – “genetic variation in susceptibility, and hence survival and onward input into the gene pool” may be a better phrase to consider. L90 – Product or medicine consumption, rather than “substance”? ……………… Methods – overall might benefit from a decision tree or table to show how data was collected and why some was discarded, currently there is quite a lot of text to work through. Main difficulty on first reading, which reappears through the paper, is how the 2-dose system differs to the traditional bioassay and why this is treated differently from this point forward. I think this is eventually made clearer near the start of the discussion (see below) but there are some elements in the discussion which may be better suited earlier in the paper. L101 – Provide precise web pages? Not that easy to find. L138 and 139 – reason for excluding some of these data points needs clarification. Statistics – is it possible or plausible to do any comparisons between years for any of this data (Fig 3 for example?) If the data resolution allows, is it possible to add a geographic element around Norwegian salmon farming zones (e.g. Kristoffersen et al., 2018)? ……………. Results Would Table 1 be easier to visualise as a line graph, and perhaps allow easier comparison with other time series data? If there is concern that the data arises from two different methods half-way through the time series, could this be physically split simply with a vertical line to denote the change? L244 – 245….slaughtered (i.e. each ton of salmonids….year)… Use of slaughtered in this section and Figure 1…does slaughtered=harvested? Word slightly suggests slaughtered=harvested + killed for welfare reasons, so make sure this is defined as harvested for food. In particular, Fig 2 and Fig 3: Description of results – I think the text could be simplified a little bit, focusing on main trends, and potentially some information (e.g. missing years) placed in the legend. Figure 2 x-axis data (years) need to be slanted or made vertical, in horizonal format they are difficult to read. Could figure 5 be superimposed onto figure 4, using a second x axis? Also, cleanerfish “deployed” into salmon pens rather than “stocked” (which doesn’t necessarily suggest a mixed species) may be a better word to use. A version of cleanerfish deployment in Norway, and research needs, appears in Powell et al., 2018 and this may be a good reference for the discussion. L336 – “medicine was unquestionably…treating salmon” L341 – remove “the scale tipped, and” …………. Discussion There seems to be much here, particularly in the first few paragraphs, that doesn’t naturally belong in this section. For instance, 380-385 is arguably better suited in the introduction or M&M, results/missing data for certain years are repeated again here in some detail, and any worries about bias could be mentioned, discussed or reassurances made in the Materials and Methods. Typically, the important specifics and reasoning for the main trends appear first, with the section becoming more general and expanding to more general applications nearer the end. Removing some of the redundant text would allow more space for this. PLOS ONE requirements need a “conclusion supported by data”, and since this work is not a standard review with plenty of references, nor a typical experimental paper, this needs to be made a lot clearer or supported with references (perhaps statistics?) for this phenomenological review of archive data (e.g. L452-455 needs references). For instance, the final conclusion suggests that there is "clear covariation" but one could argue this is subjectively analysed. Also, perhaps some expansion of future work – e.g. explore any regional or geographical differences? Any way to make this data predictive or assist modeling? Will new medicines assist and does medicine testing need to be made more streamlined or is it too ecologically risky? Will there be impacts of some of the management tools or equipment approaches not recorded by the state? Are non-medicinal mechanisms infallible and could they become less efficient (e.g. some signs that cleanerfish are improving the survival of albino lice/carry disease, vs a list of methods required to improve efficiacy and sustainability; thermolicers recently questioned). Reviewer #2: A very good manuscript, very well written and very helpful. It is also a very good example on how transparency on public data should be applied, alowing further transversal studies using historical series of data like this one. It is also a very comprehensive work and very relevant for the salmon aquaculture industry, showing the benefits of good practices. Concerning the manuscript, I would like to recommend the authors to diferentiate in the introduction the 'control measures' /as they integrate both prevention/prophylaxis and treatment/therapeutics) than purely 'treatments'. In fact, the authors already differenciate both as they do not consider in this study measures such as fallowing, snorkels, tarpaulins to control plankton layer or deep feeding measures as they are preventive. Concerning grammar, only two minor questions or typos. line 88: genetical or genetic? line 448: (a) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Francesc Padros [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Trends in de-lousing of Norwegian farmed salmon from 2000-2019 – consumption of medicines, salmon louse resistance and non-medicinal control methods PONE-D-20-16251R1 Dear Dr. Myhre Jensen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Aldo Corriero, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): All the comments of the two reviewers have been taken into consideration in the revised manuscript that can now be accepted for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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