Peer Review History
Original SubmissionNovember 6, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-30994 The Position-Reputation-Information (PRI) scale of individual prestige PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Berl, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both of the reviewers suggest minor revisions. Please address all of the comments and suggestions in your revision. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 10 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors generate a prestige scale that, in their view, avoids theoretical assumptions that limit the applicability of past scales. As such, I agree that this is a valuable contribution to the literature. I have a number of comments and questions for the authors’ consideration- see below. In particular, the independence of the scale development from any particular theory doesn’t mean there aren’t assumptions that guide the author’s choices. Line 45: Joey Cheng and colleagues would take issue with this claim. While you provide substantive critique of their scale later, the claim here is over-stated. Line 56: describe more what you mean by theory neutral. I think you are arguing, per your critiques of Cheng et al.’s scale, that the prestige concept should be operationalized independent of theories of its origin/evolution or application. But whenever anything is operationalized, there is theory at least implicitly guiding the process, in terms of how the world should be categorized. Lines 94-103: these assumptions can encompass perhaps any trait. I would think at a minimum there would have to be some greater delimiting of how you gather respondents conceptions of prestige, which incorporates some modicum of theory. For example, that not all traits we observe in others are evaluated equally (some traits seen as more favorable or rewarding than others), which affects how people socialize with each other, in particular who receives more deference than others. Indeed, you describe use of accents in this study because of their index of membership in high-status groups (line 123). Lines 125-126: the following requires more explication: “our focus is not on how respondents rate specific accents but on the relationships between the items used in the evaluation of prestige.” Line 159: based on the extreme generality of the three assumptions, its not clear how you could reduce the items in the way you did. What criteria was used to evaluate those most “indicative of prestige”? Relatedly, how did you define the most “salient terms” (line 162) in the free-listing task? Line 166-167: why should items associated with solidarity and dynamism necessarily be distinct from items people associate with prestige, let alone theoretical conceptions of prestige? Isn’t this imposing theory contrary to earlier claims? It may be the case, for example, that people more weakly associate intelligence with their notion of prestige if intelligence (information) isn’t also correlated with confidence (dynamism) or friendliness (solidarity). Line 179: the triad test requires explication Lines 182-184: before describing EFA within the prestige domain, make it clearer in the text that the EFA applied to all items (irrespective of domain) provided evidence of a prestige factor distinct from dynamism and solidarity. Lines 265-272: I’m not convinced that the position factor is necessarily cleaved into Weber’s categories. While the 3 items in the factor mirror Weber’s categories, this may owe a lot to idiosyncrasies in item selection prior to EFA and CFA. Furthermore, Weber’s categories don’t necessarily carve nature at its joints, like most social science typologies. Be more circumspect in your comparison here. Line 284: the occupational prestige literature is as reflective of the position and reputation domains as the information domain. Compared to janitors, doctors earn more money, are esteemed, and have more knowledge, for example. And may be the case that occupational prestige is driven more by the position domain or reputation domain than the information domain per se. Pages 17-20: discussion here on cross-cultural considerations and interactions among prestige domains is good and anticipated many other comments I had. I would cite the following that argues that dominance-prestige distinction does not comport with their tendency to co-occur within the same individuals, whether in human or non-human societies: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25947621. Your prestige scale may be tapping such convergence of status-generating attributes. Reviewer #2: Manuscript PONE-D-19-30994 describes the data-driven development of a new scale for measuring dimensions of prestige. My first impression was that this scale did not contribute anything new, given the popularity of the Cheng et al. dominance-prestige measure. However, upon closer examination of the authors’ arguments for the psychometric inadequacy of the dominance-prestige scale, I was persuaded that the introduction of a less theoretically-biased scale into the literature may help to advance research on human status. Moreover, the methodological rigor with which the PRI scale was developed suggests that this new scale is more psychometrically sound than currently popular alternative provides, and the methods provide a good model for future scale development. The authors are also refreshingly careful not to generalize beyond the populations examined in their study, while providing a useful and concrete framework for extending the PRI scale cross-culturally. Although there are some areas that need to be improved with minor revisions, this paper and scale should be published. I outline some suggestions for improvement and revision below. I generally agree that it is a plus that the authors avoided pre-defining prestige for participants. But it seems that the authors’ choice to use voice recordings as the stimuli is not well defended. Why not use photos, character vignettes, videos, or some other stimuli that is less loosely tied to individual differences in prestige than regional accents? Some discussion of how this choice may have altered the manifest dimensions of prestige is warranted. There is a lot of important information about scale development and validity that has been relegated to the supplementary material. As a result, the scale validity and reliability section of the main text feels relatively weak (although the evidence for validity and reliability is strong). Many of the intercorrelations between existing measures may be important to readers and researchers who are attempting to evaluate the usefulness of the PRI in their own research and should be made clearly available in the main text. I’d recommend moving as much information from the “Scale validity and reliability” in the appendix to the corresponding section in the main text. The paper is generally very clearly written and easily understandable, but there are several grammatical errors and possible typos that could be addressed with another round of careful revisions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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