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Original SubmissionFebruary 25, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-05503 Anodal transcranial direct current stimulation reduces collinear lateral inhibition in normal peripheral vision PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raveendran, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 09 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Raveendran and colleagues examined whether anodal tDCS applied to the primary visual area decreases collinear lateral inhibition. The authors applied 2mA of sham or anodal tDCS for 20 minutes and found a decrease in collinear lateral inhibition in 2λ distanced Gabor patches, in anodal but not is sham condition - during the stimulation and 30 minutes later. The authors suggest using the findings to induce perceptual training of macular degeneration patients. The introduction of the manuscript is clear and concise, the method is rigorously explained, the findings as well as real world applications are clear and prominent. The authors elegantly connect between previous findings regarding tDCS effects on early visual processes and the clinical population needs. However, to clarify the implications of the findings and to highlight the necessity for future research some minor revisions are essential. (1) The manuscript is inconsistent between the broad potential implications and the specificity of the findings. The question presented throughout the introduction is whether MD patients can benefit from a decrease in collinear lateral inhibition as a result of tDCS induced learning protocol - while the experimental manipulation is performed on healthy participants after practice. The findings do not concern perceptual learning alteration, long lasting effects of stimulation or MD patients - these remain yet to be supported hypotheses. Indeed, thirty minutes is a notable timescale for a post-stimulation drag but before suggesting a clinical treatment one should first check the anticipated change at a much greater timescale, the findings are very promising but additional limitations should be mentioned. Additionally, provided that the learning threshold was achieved before the stimulation phase, the tDCS effects are usually considered to be temporarily local (e.g., Antal, Nitsche, & Paulus, 2006). One might think of applying atDCS during the initial practice, so that the early perceptual learning process is strengthened by tDCS. Aiming to improve the visual ability this approach might provide longer lasting effects. (2) 104-105: tDCS electrode size – most likely the authors meant centimeters and not millimeters. (3) Punctuation and spacing around reference brackets are inconsistent throughout the text. As the journal does not copyedit the manuscript, it would be beneficial to perfect the typography. Concluding, the study shows a significant influence of atDCS technique on collinear lateral inhibition and opens a door for future research of tDCS effects on perceptual learning in MD patients. Reviewer #2: In this paper, the authors tested the hypothesis that transcranial electric stimulation, specifically anodal direct current stimulation (a-tDCS) reduces peripheral collinear inhibition in a single 20-minute session, unlike previous studies that necessitated of multiple behavioral sessions of perceptual learning to achieve this result. Results showed that peripheral collinear inhibition, measured as the contrast threshold for a Gabor target flanked by collinear elements, was indeed reduced during and 30 minutes after a-tDCS. Two control conditions, one in which the flankers were placed at a separation outside the range of collinear inhibition and a second one using sham stimulation, showed no change in contrast thresholds. The experimental question that the authors tackled is interesting and timely, since collinear inhibition has been linked to visual crowding, one of the main obstacles to object recognition and reading speed in peripheral vision and one of the main targets of rehabilitative therapies for patients suffering from central vision loss. I find the paper well written and the analysis properly conducted. I would have, however, liked to find some more explanation or discussion of the choice of parameters. In particular, it would be useful to know the reasons for: 1) The control condition: Authors use a 6λ target-to-flankers separation as a control condition, citing previous studies ‘reporting collinear inhibition for 2λ but not for 6λ’. However, previous studies also showed that 6λ is a separation at which collinear modulation is still present but with an inverse polarity (Maniglia et al. (2015) showed peripheral collinear modulation in peripheral vision up to about 10λ.), rather than just a separation for which collinear inhibition is not present. A ‘cleaner’ approach to this, and a more common control condition in this literature, is the use of orthogonal flankers (Shani and Sagi, 2005; Lev and Polat, 2011; Maniglia et al., 2011) placed at the same target-to-flankers separation. This allows for a control condition that is identical to the experimental condition, with the only difference that no collinear modulation is expected for target-flankers orientation differences of 90° (Polat and Sagi, 1993), thus providing a ‘true’ baseline. It would be important to motivate or comment upon this decision in the paper. 2) The eccentricity of the tested configuration. Not too dissimilar from the previous point, a common eccentricity for the studies of peripheral collinear effect seems to be 4° (Shani and Sagi, 2005; Lev and Polat, 2011; Maniglia et al., 2011; 2015). What was the reason for the authors to choose 6°? Lev and Polat (2011; 2015) suggested that the range of collinear inhibition might increase with eccentricity, thus making the choice of 6λ slightly ‘risky’ as a non-inhibitory separation. However, the different pattern of results seems to solve this point for the authors. Still, only an orthogonal flanker condition would provide a clear reference for the direction of the collinear modulation. 3) The spatial frequency of the stimuli. While foveal studies on collinear facilitation, either single or multiple-session, are usually conducted using mid-high spatial frequencies (e.g., Polat and Sagi, 1993; Polat, 2009), previous studies on peripheral collinear modulation seem to suggest that lower spatial frequencies maximize this effect (Maniglia, Pavan, Trotter, 2015). Why did the authors choose 7cpd? 4) The stimulus size. The size of the stimulus is reported as 1°. In this literature it is common to report the σ of the Gabor patch, with several studies scaling it according to the spatial frequency (often σ=λ, e.g., Polat and Sagi, 1993; 1994; Shani and Sagi, 2005). What was the reason for this specific stimulus size? Previous studies suggest that the interaction between target-to-flankers separation, stimulus size and spatial frequency might affect the range of collinear modulation (Woods, Nugent, Peli, 2002). Finally, I would comment upon the results at 6λ. Do they suggest that a-tDCS might not affect collinear facilitation (assuming that 6λ at 6° are not too dissimilar from 6λ at 4°)? Indeed, a number of studies suggest that, while collinear inhibition might rely on V1, collinear facilitation might be due at least in part, to extrastriate/higher level feedback mechanisms (Freeman et al. 2001; Angelucci et al., 2002; Angelucci and Bressloff, 2006; Maniglia, Trotter & Aedo-Jury, 2019). The involvement of areas outside the hotspot of the occipital electrode might partially explain this, although it is just a speculation. Minor points -Did the participants complete both sessions within the same day? what was the time interval between the two sessions? Did you control for long(er) lasting a-tDCS effects (e.g., difference between PS30_S and BL_A for those who started with real stimulation)? -What was the luminance resolution? -Was the luminance of the monitor linearized? -In the Results section, the thresholds for 6λ should be reported as well (line 135) -Were the flankers partially superimposed to the target in the 2λ condition? This seems to be a common occurrence for short separation (see Polat and Sagi, 1993, Figure 1). If that was the case, what was the luminance of the overlapping portions? -A previous paper (Pirulli, Fertonani, Miniussi, 2013) argued that a-tDCS might work best when applied ‘offline’ (i.e., before the behavioral measurement). This seems consistent with your PS30_A results, a little bit less with the DS_A one. -More of a personal curiosity: It would have been interesting to have crowding measurements before and after stimulation and test whether collinear inhibition and crowding changes correlated. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Taly Bonder Reviewer #2: Yes: Marcello Maniglia [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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