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Original SubmissionJanuary 27, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-02355 The engaging nature of interactive gestures PLOS ONE Dear Dr. curioni, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As noted by both reviewers, this is a very well-written manuscript and the findings are an important contribution to the current literature on interactive gestures. Please make the suggested changes, including the additional statistical analyses as suggested by Reviewer #2. Also, please incorporate the citations that both reviewers suggest. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 02 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This extremely well-written ms. describes an elegant suite of studies that explore the engaging nature of "interactive" rather than "communicative" actions, i.e. actions which require activity on the part of the human observer drawing him/her in to interact. By cleverly combining this with a spatial compatibility task, the interference of such stimuli was objectively assessed. Across different experiments it was shown that interactive gestures impact response selection and spatial compatibility as compared to communicative actions. The authors interprete this as evidence for a priviliged access of interactive gestures to perceptual and action systems. I applaud the authors to systematically addressing this subtle, but important distinction! I am very impressed by the choice of stimuli and the methodological rigor with which the studies were conducted. I strongly recommend publication of this ms. and only have minor comments: 1) A study by von der Lühe et al. (2016) also investigated the impact of "communicative" actions. The authors may want to make reference to this study and could also use this opportunity to briefly discuss whether interactive gestures might bring about different expectations/predictions in the observer and how this might play out in a predictive coding scheme. 2) Schilbach and colleagues published several papers (2012, 2013), in which they investigated the impact of social gaze cues on spatial compatibility effects. This papers appear to be missing in the bibliography. 3) Finally, it might be tempting to speculate how interactive gestures might be important (motivationally and otherwise) for matters of mental health. It has been suggested that psychiatric disorders could be construed as "disorders of social interaction", where interactive gestures might also figure prominently (Schilbach 2016). Maybe the authors might want to speculate (or not). Reviewer #2: Curioni and co-authors report an interesting study in which, in three behavioral experiments, they tested the difference between two types of social actions, namely interactive and communicative gestures, in a spatial compatibility task. By measuring the interference effect of observing lateralized task-irrelevant gestures when participants were requested to respond to target stimuli, they showed a reduced spatial compatibility effect in reaction times for interactive gestures (which were chosen to elicit a complementary response in the observers) as compared to communicative gestures, irrespective of the responding hand. Response accuracy showed that participants were more accurate when the position of the distractor and target was on the same side, regardless of the type of stimulus (interactive, communicative). The manuscript is well written and provides an interesting extension to the available literature. The experimental design is sound and the data were rigorously analyzed. I have few queries that the Authors should address to improve the clarity of the manuscript. 1) The first point regards the discussion of the obtained results with reference to the potential difference in salience for interactive gestures, given their intrinsically engaging nature, as compared to communicative gestures. The results of all three experiments consistently show for RTs that interactive gestures lead to a reduction of the spatial compatibility effect as compared to communicative gestures. Therefore, it emerged that for interactive gestures, incompatible trials (distractor and targets on opposite sides) were less incompatible/interfering than for communicative gestures. Given that this effect was not limited to the dominant hand which would have been recruited to perform a complementary response to the presented interactive gesture, the Authors conclude that this could seemingly be a generalized effect. Thus, the effect would not reflect any specification of the required motor plan, but be related to a general motor engagement to socially interact which is activated when we are faced with interactive gestures. This unspecific effect for interactive gestures could be dependent on differences in the adopted types of stimuli, however the Authors report to have controlled for this in a go/no-go control task reported in the supplementary materials (e.g., p.18, line 423: “stimuli in the two categories were matched for perceptual salience and social relevance”). Nonetheless, it is unclear to me how the adopted go/no-go task can disentangle the issue of difference in salience/social relevance between communicative and interactive gestures. I would then ask the Authors to comment on this aspect as it is relevant for the interpretation of the obtained results. In addition, please better report both in the supplementary materials and in the main text the rationale of having used this type of control task for the validation of the experimental stimuli and to control for perceptual salience and social relevance. 2) In addition, the statistical analysis of the go/no-go task included only the Stimulus number as within-subject factor, however it would be relevant to test the role of Gesture-type to be able to differentiate between the two types of gestures. Plus, in the control task the results for the accuracy are missing, while only the ANOVA results for RTs are reported. Please, add these missing information to the results paragraph (see supplementary materials). 3) Results: please report a measure of effect size in the results. In relation to this, is the ηp 2 = .25 reported in the sample size calculation (pp.14-15, lines 350-355) as the observed effect size of the Compatibility x Stimulus type second order interaction referring to results of Experiment 1 or 2? 4) Discussion: When discussing the obtained results in the Discussion paragraphs, please specify that they refer to RTs and do not apply also to accuracy data (e.g., p. 11, lines 257-263; “there was a significant interaction between Gesture-type and spatial Compatibility, indicating that the Interactive gestures led to a reduced CE as compared to Communicative gestures”). 5) When discussing the role of interference effects in interactive situations (e.g., p.18, lines 424-427), the Authors may also find of interest a recent paper in which the observation of an interactive request gesture is reported to facilitate the execution of an incongruent, but appropriate, complementary response, while interfering with a congruent, but inappropriate, action (Betti et al., 2019, PeerJ). 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