Peer Review History
Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-34254 The effect of Myaglic Encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome (ME/CFS) severity on cellular bioenergetic function PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tomas: Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by July 22, 2020. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript “The effect of Myalgic Encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome (ME/CFS) severity on cellular bioenergetic function” by Tomas et al. re-analyzed previously published data to determine the impact of severity on glycolytic and mitochondrial function in peripheral blood mononuclear cells (PBMCs). The authors divide up their previous ME/CFS cohort into “moderate” and “severe” and utilize new calculations to determine ATP production rates and distinguish between glycolytic acidification and respiratory acidification. While the concept of teasing out the relevance of disease severity of PBMC bioenergetic function, this study does not advance enough upon the previous publication to justify being a stand-alone manuscript. Major concerns are listed out below. 1) As the authors state, the heterogeneity of this disease is wide-ranging. As such, the line between moderate and severe forms of this disease would seem to need to be better defined aside from just the ability to come into the fatigue clinic. Perhaps a more thorough description in the methods/results as to the criteria chosen (including those outlined in the NICE guidelines), and how these criteria might influence how and when PBMCs were isolated (i.e. age, sex, stage of disease) would all provide critical information that is missing. 2) Claiming that the severe group significantly delineates from the moderate group (i.e. in Figure 2B) seems to also be attributable to a few of the more severe cases, as ~40% of individuals still cluster in a similar range to the moderate cohort. Along these lines, there also is some bias towards to the severe cohort, as 25 patient PBMCs fall into the severe group, whereas only 13 fall into the moderate group. As such, it is hard to fully determine which of the 25 individuals is the best representation of this cohort. 3) The difference between glycolytic acidification and respiratory acidification, and how they are determined, is also not made very clear. A better description of how the authors came to differentiate between the two is needed. Reviewer #2: The study by Tomas et al, investigated whether Myalgic Encephalomyolitis/chronic Fatigue syndrome (ME/CFS) severity correlates with mitochondrial and glycolytic functions. The authors re-examined previously published bioenergetics data on peripheral blood mononuclear cells (PBMCs) using an equation described by another research group, which accounts for both the respiratory acidification and the glycolytic acidification when calculating glycolytic parameters from a glycolysis stress test. The authors using these equations investigated total ATP production rate, the percentage contribution of glycolysis and OXPHOS to this total ATP along with glycolysis rates and mitochondrial oxygen consumption parameters. The authors show primarily that both ME/CFS cohorts, moderately and severely affected patients, show evidence of mitochondrial dysfunction, thus concluding that disease severity does not correlate with mitochondrial function. The authors however discriminate the two cohorts based on glucose metabolism, illustrating glycolytic impairments only in the severely affected cohort. While the findings are interesting in highlighting distinct bioenergetics profiles within ME/CFS populations, the following points should be addressed: Major points: 1) The innovation is not clear since prior studies have underlined both glycolytic and mitochondrial dysfunctions as contributors to the illness. How is this study contributing in a better understanding of ME/CFS physiopathology? The citations undervalue prior works related to the approach in general (eg: Shiva, Darley-Usmar, Molina groups among others) 2) The authors have highlighted in the discussion the importance of repeating these experiments on other cell types. My question is along those lines, given that PBMCs are metabolically quiescent cells; how are these findings relevant to the disease mechanisms? Are the authors confident that their findings would still be pertinent in metabolically active cells? 3) The authors have focused their study primarily on mitochondria respiration rates and glyscolysis; and have switched the cells to low glucose to assess the effect of glucose concentration rates on ATP production. Have the authors considered studying the lipid metabolism? Are mitochondria reliant on fatty acid beta-oxidation in this model? If so, is this response also different between the two ME/CFS Cohorts? This limitation should be addressed or at least discussed. 4) The authors suggest that low glycolysis rates may explain the severity of the disease in the severely affected group. If that is the case, the study and its conclusion would benefit from modeling altered glycolysis function (pdh mutations, PDH silencing) in moderately affected cells to see if it mimics disease severity. Reviewer #3: This interesting article reanalyzes previously published data of PBMC bioenergetics in fatigue syndrome. As technologies and ideas change this is a reasonable approach. The different analysis does appear to reveal some new aspects so this is a worthwhile contribution to the literature. However, it needs to go a bit further with a more comprehensive approach including new information that the bioenergetic profiles revealed by these analyses in human populations is an integrated program. Once these analyses are included a clearer picture may emerge. The impact will be improved by a more comprehensive overview and context which at the moment is minimal. Major points 1) A comprehensive multi variate analysis is important since it may reveal changes in the overall bioenergetic program as shown in Mitochondria in precision medicine; linking bioenergetics and metabolomics in platelets. Redox Biol 22, 101165 2019 An advantage of this approach is that you do not need to separate into moderate or severe which increases statistical power-which maybe the real reason you do not see a relationship to disease severity. You can also include a clinical parameter in the analysis to test this. 2) A BHI calculation may also be revealing here. 3) Do not understand Figure 3 -The with and without glucose experiment is confusing. Some clearer description of the original experiment is needed so readers do not need to read both. Some justification of using frozen cells is needed-the mitochondria cannot make ATP after freeze thawing so is the valid? Minor Points 1)PBMC are a heterogenous mixture of cells with different bioenergetic programs (see Redox Biology 2:206-210 2014). This limitation needs to be noted. 2) The citations are woefully inadequate and do not reflect the current thinking in the field of translational bioenergetics or the significant contributions from other groups. Please extend the introduction and discussion significantly to address this. 3) Materials and Methods need to be more complete defining the method for PBMC isolation and characterization even though this maybe in the previous publication. 4) Strictly speaking this is cellular respiration not mitochondrial since these are not isolated mitochondria and other factors contribute to the control of respiration which are not mitochondrial-please change this terminology. (see ref in comment 2). This is not ATP production but ATP linked respiration (see Biological chemistry 401 (1), 3-29 2019). 5) A section is needed on normalization and the definition of parameters-eg coupling efficiency. 6) The statistical markings are missing from 2A. Does not look significant but text says it is. 7) No need for sentence 191 -this is not the guideline but the published papers have for some time shown this understanding of the different processes contributing to ECAR 8) The conclusions are not really conclusions but a list of what was done-rewrite to discuss conclusions ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have made the recommended changes to the manuscript The paper is acceptable for publication No further comments Reviewer #3: The revision is excellent and the presentation of the data in Figure 2 intriguing! 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