Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 23, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-28396 Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice. PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Mittra, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript was reviewed by two experts and we received mixed responses from them. Please address all comments. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 02 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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* Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the present study “Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice” the authors studied the possible role of cell-free chromatin in sepsis. This is a consecutive study after the discussion of cell-free chromatin particles in other disease models from the same authors. Here are some major concerns: 1. The authors claimed Figure 1A is the proof of the existence of cell free chromatin particles in LPS induced sepsis model. However, there are some major defects in these images. First, the images cannot reflect the typical structures of brain, lung and heart tissues. Second, the DNA antibody listed by the authors is mouse IgM, but the secondary antibody is against mouse IgG. Theoretically this immunostaining cannot work. Third, a lot of areas have positive DAPI staining but not DNA staining. Forth, the “positive” staining of cell free chromatin particles cannot be simply described as chromatin in the extracellular area. According to the data, they can only be described as somewhere not in the nucleus. Fifth, the specificity of these staining, especially the possibility that they are the result of unspecific binding of antibodies to dead tissues, should be better defined. The authors need to revise all these defects. 2. Although the authors used three reagents to neutralize or degrade cell free chromatin, necessary controls were not used. For neutralizing antibody, an isotype control Ig antibody should be used. For an enzyme, a deactivated enzyme should be used. For a compound containing heavy metal, the same organic compound with a light metal should be used. 3. In Figure 6, LDH is not a tissue specific parameter so the authors should not use it to define liver damage. Creatinine and BUN are kidney parameters but they are not produced by kidneys. So the authors should not put “renal” before them. Also, AST is not liver specific, so the authors should remove “liver” before AST. 4. The alarmin effects of DNA, histone and other nuclear proteins have been well defined. Do the authors claim a unique function of the cell-free chromatin particles as a whole or a combined phenomenon of the already defined alarmins? Reviewer #2: In the study 'Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice', the authors have shown convincing proof that chCh particles are involved in sepsis, and neutralizing them helps alleviate the adverse pathophysiological effects associated with it. This is an important study, and hopefully can help develop effective strategies to deal with sepsis. Some minor revisions are recommended below as follows: 1) Abstract (Line 29) and Introduction (Line 69): Please check sentence construction for '..those that circulated blood..'. 2) Introduction: It would be nice if the authors can elaborate more on the mechanisms by which cfCh particles induces DNA damage, apoptosis and activation of the inflammatory cytokine cascades. How are cfCh particles even transported from the extracellular domain into the cell? Elaborate more on findings from previous work (Refs 12-17). 3) Materials and Methods: Animals: Please include data about any side effects experienced by the animals in the study plus their weight in the manuscript. This is important in order to rule out any harmful effects on 'bystander' healthy cells which the authors mention, but don't discuss in detail later in the discussion section. 4) Materials and Methods: Detection of cellular DNA damage, apoptosis and inflammation in organs, tissues and PBMCs by IF: Please elaborate on the indirect immuno-fluorescence method used to estimate levels of gH2AX, caspase-3, Bcl-2, NF-kB, IL-6, TNFa and IFNg. 5) Materials and Methods: Statistical analysis: As multiple groups are being compared simultaneously, a simple t-test won't suffice. Please use ANOVA or a non parametric test such as Mann Whitney. 6) Results: Please eliminate all figure captions. This is unecessary, or can be used as Figure legend captions. 7) Results: Result titles/caption should reflect actual findings and not just what was done. 8)Results: Figure 3: How were thymocytes and splenocytes isolated? 9) Figures: Image quality is poor. Please upload high quality tiff images. 10) Discussion: Please discuss the potential of side effects by using all of these cfCh particle-inactivating agents on healthy cells. Elaborate on bystander effect. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Revision 1 |
PONE-D-19-28396R1 Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice. PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Mittra, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript was reviewed by two experts and one reviewer raised minor comments. A quick editorial decision will be taken after satisfactory revision and the manuscript will not send to reviewers. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 08 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Partha Mukhopadhyay, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current version of “Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice.” made a lot of improvement compared to the last version. Here is a minor concern the authors still have to address: The authors claimed that the effect of cell free chromatin is unique from already known alarmin effect of histone and DNA because their neutralization can bring inflammation to baseline level. However, this is not entirely true according to the result of circulating inflammatory factors (Figure 2) and sepsis survival (Figure 8). The authors need to provide a better discussion of the contribution from each inflammatory element. Also the authors need to provide some clues why tissue inflammation is resolved while circulating inflammatory factors are still high. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice. PONE-D-19-28396R2 Dear Dr. Mittra, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Partha Mukhopadhyay, Ph.D. Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-28396R2 Cell-free chromatin particles released from dying host cells are global instigators of endotoxin sepsis in mice. Dear Dr. Mittra: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Partha Mukhopadhyay Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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