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Original SubmissionJuly 24, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-20855 Streptococcus thermophilus alters the expression of genes associated with innate and adaptive immunity in human peripheral blood mononuclear cells PLOS ONE Dear Dr Dargahi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 24 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscripts presented by Dargahi et al presented data of only mRNA expression in the PMBC of donors to conclude the immune regulation by Streptococcus thermphilus. While the premise to study Streptococcus thermphilus is interesting because of their applications as probiotics, there are several major flaws in the experimental model used that must be addressed. Major comments: 1. The relevance of the experimental model used needs to be justify. The authors used PBMC co-culture with ST285 as the primary system to explain the immune regulation properties of the bacteria. Streptococcus thermphilus is a probiotic, and they generally exist within the mucous layer of the gut and do not cross over to meet immune cells in the blood where the PBMC are harvested from. Importantly, there are a wide array of studies demonstrating that the immune cells in the gut differ from the PBMC both in terms of activation status and proportion of different subsets. The authors need to justify the use of PBMCs and limit conclusion to immune subsets which are comparable between the gut and the blood. 2. In this co-culture system, the control used is without the bacteria. It would be important to include a unrelated bacteria strain such as E.coli to emphasize the specificity of the response induced by ST285. 3. The entire paper relied solely on gross gene expression data from total PBMC. This lacks the specificity to understand the impact on specific cell type in the fraction because most cytokines could be produced by more than 1 cell type. In addition, there are no protein expression data to back up the conclusion. I would propose doing intracellular staining of cytokines in specific subsets through flowcytometry in the PBMC on the core cytokines identified from the gene expression study. 4. The presentation of the data needs to be improved. Particularly, the heat map in fig 1 is difficult to read. Usually, heat map data are presented using hierarchical clustering, with the genes on 1 axis and donors on another axis, to clearly display the differences between stimulated and unstimulated. Next, the author did one-way ANOVA analysis for all the figures, I assume its between different genes displayed in each panel. This is unnecessary since which genes goes into which panel is arbitrary. Instead, since each donor have a un-stimulated controls, the author should use wilcoxon-matched pairs signed rank test for each respective gene. Lastly, while the mean value of the unstimulated controls will be 1, they should still be plotted in to display the variation between them. Reviewer #2: You had a conclusion as a ''upregulation of IL-1 alpha, IL-6, IL 10, and downregulation of IL-2, IL-18 and an absence of change in IL-17A (despite increase in IL-23 alpha) designates ST285 to possess anti inflammatory effects on human PBMC''. Interleukin 6 (IL-6) is an interleukin that acts as both a pro-inflammatory cytokine and an anti-inflammatory myokine.Interleukin (IL)-6 is produced at the site of inflammation and plays a key role in the acute phase response as defined by a variety of clinical and biological features such as the production of acute phase proteins. In general, Interleukin 1 alpha is responsible for the production of inflammation, as well as the promotion of fever and sepsis. We can say both of IL-1 and IL-6 have inflamatuarty affect. So that, It should be explained how you interpret the increase of IL-1 alpha and IL-6 syntheses as anti-inflammatory effect. When writing bacterial names should be paid attention to Nomenclature of Microorganisms. Binary names, consisting of a generic name and a specific epithet (e.g., Escherichia coli), must be used for all microorganisms. Names of genus level may be used alone, but specific and subspecific epithets may not. A specific epithet must be preceded by a generic name, written out in full the first time it is used in a paper. Thereafter, the generic name should be abbreviated to the initial capital letter (e.g., E. coli), provided there can be no confusion with other genera used in the paper. Reviewer #3: 1- Authors gave information about PBMC in the section of Materials and Methods which can be presented in the introduction section. 2- Authors did not write the number of the collected whole blood samples used in this study in the section of Materials and methods but they wrote it in the result section. (please write it in the materials and Methods section). 3- It is preferable to list the genes and housekeeping genes tested in this study (as supplementary file), their reaction conditions and their role as innate or adaptive to be helpful for any researcher in his study. Reviewer #4: Dargahi et al. discusses the possible effects of Streptococcus thermophilus on innate and adaptive immune response using in vitro (ex vivo) PBMCs. The objective of this study according to the authors was to understand Streptococcus thermophilus anti-inflammatory and modulatory properties. Streptococcus thermophilus is used as probiotic and affects gut microbiome. The manuscript is clear and well-written with detailed materials and methods section. However, I believe the authors could have consolidated the figures into 3 or 4 figures as the results section was lengthy describing just a single experiment. There are drawbacks of this study, first of all, the whole study is based on a single experiment of isolation of PBMCs from buffy coats from blood bank and performing an expression mini-array (qPCR profiling array of 84 genes). To start with, if that's the only experiment done, authors should have tried to get better quality RNA by storing the lysed PBMCs (treated and untreated) in the lysis buffer of the provided manufacturer. If that was done, RNA quality would have been much better than going to RIN values of 7.5, they could have easily reached 10 with minimum of 8.5 (high quality RNA). Another thing is that other experiments could have been done to support the expression analysis data and take it a step further. The authors drew too many conclusions from just qPCR profiling of the treated and untreated PBMCs. Additional supporting experiments should have been done. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Teck-Hui Teo Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Rehab Mahmoud Abd El-Baky Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily responded to all my questions and made the necessary changes to the manuscript. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Most of my comments have been addressed. However, I still think the supporting data is not enough for the conclusions, so it is up to the editor to see what fits publication in PLoS ONE. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Ali Acar Reviewer #3: Yes: Rehab Mahmoud Abd El-Baky Reviewer #4: No |
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PONE-D-19-20855R1 Streptococcus thermophilus alters the expression of genes associated with innate and adaptive immunity in human peripheral blood mononuclear cells Dear Dr. Dargahi: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Hossam M Ashour Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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