Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 29, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-27259Colon length in pediatric health and constipation measured using magnetic resonance imaging and three dimensional skeletonizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marciani, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 30 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: Colonic Volume Changes in Paediatric Constipation Compared to Normal Values Measured Using MRI - https://doi.org/10.3390/diagnostics11060974 3. In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. 4. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The authors presented colon length in pediatric health and constipation using MRI. This study is a very interesting, but I have a few questions. Specific comments 1. The authors indicated the colon length for all participants correlated significantly with their age, height and weight. Specifically, to what age do the results of this study apply to children? Would it be a good idea to include data on age and gender etc.. as a supplemental table? 2. I comprehended the largest differences between groups were the ascending colon and the recto-sigmoid colon. What do these results mean? 3. MRI was used in this study. Is there any difference or advantage between MRI and other tests such as intravenous or CT? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting paper that introduces a novel and simple approach to measure colonic length using non-radioactive measurements (MRI). They measure some simple colon length measures using a skeletonization algorithm. In my opinion, the manuscript only needs minor editing before it is suitable for publication. In general, check the punctuations, there are some places where there is a space too much between e.g., the p-value and the “=” sign. For example, in line 177, 189, 203, 205. These needs to be consistent and in line with the journal specifications. Line 128, figure caption. There is a “is” to much. Line 162, “are” instead of “and” Line 234, “thank” instead of “than” Line 256, “with sex and ..” missing a word Abstract: - You only mention the age of the constipated children. Can you add that the control group is age-matched or provide their range of age also? Methods: - To my knowledge of skeleton algorithms (I have not tried the plugin you have used), it can be difficult to avoid that the colon midline does not take “shortcuts” between the colon segments in the cases, where the segmented volumes are very close to each other, for example in the flexures or in the sigmoid area. This will potentially underestimate the true length measure. If you took any precautions to avoid this, then please describe it so others can easier replicate the work. o You have described some of the precautions in the discussion. It would be simpler to get the relevant information in the methods section. o When doing the skeleton algorithm on the different segments one at a time, then the midline will end at the top/bottom of the segment and not at the middle of the segment/junction to the next segment. Do the used algorithm take this into account, i.e., using a predefined start/end point. Or else each segment might be a little overestimated. Can you elaborate a little bit more on the analysis steps, so there is no doubt on how this works. I would like to see figure 1c from a sagittal view also. Results - You state that the hypothesis is about colon length differences between the groups. That result should be mentioned before the BSA corrected values. One might argue that the BSA corrected values are most representative, however you should be truer to your initial hypothesis. Discussion: - Can you include your opinion on measures of colon ptosis in relation to your total colon or transverse colon estimation? A very recent study has shown the correlation between slow transit constipation and transverse colon ptosis as measured on abdominal x-rays: Sun et al; Degree of transverse colon ptosis: an alternative surrogate for evaluation of slow transit constipation. Quantitative Imaging in Medicine and Surgery; Vol 13, No 9 (September 01, 2023) - In line 232 you mention that colon length was correlated with age in the FC group only. Could that be due to the fact that the control group was older than the FC group, meaning that many of the controls might have reached the full-grown length of the colon, why a correlation only exists when you are still growing? Reviewer #2: Comments on this study: 1. The authors should provide information concerning the reliability of MRI images using 3D image analysis skeletonization technique in measurement of colon length. 2. It is well accepted that MRI study has a limitation in young children who are not cooperative with this time consuming technique. It is noted that the children enrolled in this study aged over 10 years, therefore, the data of this study would be applicable to only older children , not children in general. 3. Data in this study shows that the colon length of constipated children is longer than healthy children. However, the results do not clearly indicate that colonic length contributes to the pathogenesis of functional constipation. To investigate whether the longer colon is a cause of functional constipation or secondary to prolonged fecal retention , a study should be designed to compare colonic length measured by MRI studies in the same patient at pre treatment and at recovery post treatment of functional constipation. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-23-27259R1Colon length in pediatric health and constipation measured using magnetic resonance imaging and three dimensional skeletonizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marciani, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 15 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Colon length in pediatric health and constipation measured using magnetic resonance imaging and three dimensional skeletonization PONE-D-23-27259R2 Dear Dr. Marciani, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tsutomu Kumamoto Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I believe that this study should be accepted by PLOS ONE as the authors have sufficiently addressed the reviewers’ queries. I hope that this research will contribute to further advancements in this field. Reviewers' comments: |
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