Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 2, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-12863Excess maternal mortality in Brazil: Regional inequalities and trajectories during the COVID-19 epidemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Orellana, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Maternal death and excess mortality during the pandemic were evaluated. Analysis of excess mortality has proven useful for evaluating the effects of the pandemic. Could authors explain the meaning of the counterfactual approach in this well-done analysis? Interactions of age group and period were explored and more detail in these results is expected. Further exploring pre-eclampsia, eclampsia, and premature birth would allow for better public policies in maternal health. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 07 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Could authors explain the meaning of the counterfactual approach in this well-done analysis? Interactions of age group and period were explored and more detail in these results is expected. Further exploring pre-eclampsia, eclampsia, and premature birth would allow for better public policies in maternal health. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The present article reports the results of a study that was conducted to estimate excess maternal deaths in Brazil and its macroregions as well as their trajectories in the first 15 months of the COVID-19 epidemic. The study used aggregate national data from 2015 until 2021. The study findings showed a 64% excess in maternal deaths in Brazil during the COVID-19 pandemic, with regional heterogeneous trajectories. The manuscript is well written and the analysis appears to be robust and well thought out to achieve the proposed objective. The results are important for the Brazilian and world scenario, as they point out how the Covid pandemic may have an impact on the excess of maternal deaths, especially in low and middle countries, where these deaths are an important public health problem, with a greater burden on the most vulnerable women. The authors may wish to consider the following comments? In the discussion, “limited access to family planning and safe abortion services is pointed out as a contributor to the increase in preventable maternal deaths”. The study does not present an analysis by the causes of death to support these hypotheses. We know that eclampsia and preeclampsia have been associated to covid-19, as is also discussed in the article. In this sense, the results would benefit from a brief description of the causes of death during the pandemic period to better discuss the findings that could be placed in complementary material, for example. Regarding the limitation "The analyzed data are considered preliminary, making it possible for deaths to become reclassified as maternal and for their dates to change..." - It would be important to discuss the direction in which this data gap might affect the results. As the data are preliminary, it is expected that they are underreported, with the excess of death perhaps being greater during the pandemic period. It would be interesting to further discuss these directions and their implications for the study. Considering the nature of the data, the current state of surveillance of the death of women of childbearing age should also be discussed, especially in the period of the pandemic. should be discussed in the limitations section. Reviewer #2: Introduction • The introduction is short and well writhed. However, I suggest describing better the context of the pandemic that supports the hypothesis. • Maybe, would be interesting, to tell a little about maternal mortality in Brazil. The tragedy involving maternal mortality in Brazil is not exclusively explained by covid-19, though, was aggravated by the pandemic. Methods • I suggest describing the study design according to Morgenstern, 1995. https://www.annualreviews.org/doi/epdf/10.1146/annurev.pu.16.050195.000425 • The number of births could vary considering the period of March 2015 – February 2020 in comparison with 2020 and 2021 (even adjusted for the same period). Then, I think will be safer to calculate the excess mortality by maternal mortality ratio and not by the absolute number of death. To reinforce this idea, there is strong evidence that the number of births decreases in Brazil considering SINASC in 2020. • I understand that the manuscript aims to calculate the excess of maternal mortality. However, could be more interesting, also, analyzed the maternal mortality ratio by region. The results only inform that have excess mortality. But what is the severity of the situation? How was it before the pandemic and how much worse has it become? If the authors conduct this analysis, the manuscript adds value. • Why was used this classification age (10-24; 25-36 and 37-49)? In maternal mortality it is very common to use 10-19 years– adolescents; 20-35 – adults; and 35 and more – women with increased risk of complications. Results • The figures need better definition in legends Discussion The discussion is very good. But, maybe needs to suit the new results. In discussion, some topics could complement to explain the increase in maternal mortality: 1) propagating ineffective drugs and delaying vaccine purchases 2) misinformation about vaccines and the use of masks 3) requirement of a medical prescription for the vaccination of pregnant and postpartum women 4) delay in the approval of vaccination for pregnant and postpartum adolescents 5) delay in the approval of a law on the work remote/license of pregnant women and guarantee of income for pregnant women in informal work situations ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Excess maternal mortality in Brazil: Regional inequalities and trajectories during the COVID-19 epidemic PONE-D-22-12863R1 Dear Dr. Orellana, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. I am sorry for the delay. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rosely Sichieri Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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