Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 23, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-23773 Incident prolonged QT interval in midlife and late-life cognitive performance PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suemoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration by 3 Reviewers and an Academic Editor, all of the critiques of all three Reviewers must be addressed in detail in a revision to determine publication status. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision, but revision of the original submission without directly addressing the critiques of the three Reviewers does not guarantee acceptance for publication in PLOS ONE. If the authors do not feel that the queries can be addressed, please consider submitting to another publication medium. A revised submission will be sent out for re-review. The authors are urged to have the manuscript given a hard copyedit for syntax and grammar. Journal Requirements 1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the manuscript by Suemoto1 et al., it was shown that “Incident prolonged QT interval in midlife and late-life cognitive performance." In this study, the authors tried to show that the time rate of blood pressure variation was a risk factor of developing brain edema. This study is interesting. However, critical flaws are pointed below. Major comments #1; Patients with the use of hypertensive therapy. How many subjects were treated with antihypertensive agent. Several agents might be associated with the study results. Several studies showed that hypertensive status has negative impact on blood brain barrier (BBB) permeability resulting in BBB breakdown. In this point, cerebral autoregulation may be disrupted in the very elderly hypertensive patients. Long acting CCB, ACEI and ARB which does not decrease cerebral blood flow (CBF) are suggested to be appropriate in BP control with high risk at stroke, whereas diuretic which does decrease CBF is not. From these points, it is possible to take the possibility into account that the antihypertensive agents could be affected by the class of antihypertensives agents with cognitive function. How would be the results if the impact of antihypertensive agent class were taken into account in the regression model? #2: It would be helpful if there was information other than antihypertensive medication (e.g. use of statin, hypoglycemic agent). #3: Antihypertensive agents after baseline This question may be similar to that in #1. Althoguh antihypertensive agents that could be used in the baseline would be limited, it would be helpful if there was information about the contents of antihypertensive medication after baseline. These agents change during the follow up might affect the results. #4: Short QT Recent notion is not only long QT but also short QT also associated with adverse cardiovascular events. Thus, short QT should be taken into account. #5: Incidence of Alzheimer disease, vascular dementia or total dementia I would be interesting if the relationship between QT length and incidence of Alzheimer disease, vascular dementia or total dementia. Reviewer #2: Paper bySuemoto et all addresses interesting question whether prolonged QT might be associated with decline in cognitive function. The paper is very clearly written and I do not have any objection to statistical analysis. However, there are several points which I should raise. • QT interval is a dynamic parameter affected by several factors, which were not reported or considered in statistical analysis. It should be therefore at least mentioned in limitations of the study the possible effect of presence of bundle branch block, hypokalemia and hypocalcemia, presence of heart failure, ischemia, cerebrovascular disease, endocrine disorders etc. • There is huge attrition during follow-up. Again, it is usual and inevitable in this kind of study. But the possibility is that it could affect results. • As QT interval duration affects many drug classes, the estimate that use of this medication is only 2 to 3 % might be underestimated, mainly in older age. Please comment. • The cut-off value of 370 ms might be too low to be associated with any outcome. Have you considered to use more strict cut-off value, e.g. >400 ms, >440 ms? Reviewer #3: Dear Colleague Thank you for this article, which is relevant, and interesting. The methodology is particularly developed, with particular attention to missing data. The limits of methodology (and multiple imputation) are detailed in the discussion. I have some minor comments to submit to the authors: - Why did not you compared the characteristics of the population according to the extension of the QT in Table 1? I particularly wonder about the difference that there could be concerning the profession (clerical, sales, professional or managerial job) in the 2 groups, and how the authors explain this difference. I think this is a point worth discussing. - A difference may also be present regarding the ApoE-4 allele (?) - There are 2 errors in the Total column of Table 1: the total number of "jobs" (708 + 419 = 1127 and not 787), the total number of "hypertension" (435 + 551 = 986 and not 225); the rates of these two results are also incorrect. Among the limitations, I would add that CASI estimates a cognitive decline (the main cause of which is known to be Alzheimer's disease); perhaps the prolonged QT interval is not a good indicator for cognitive declines in a broad sense, but could be a good indicator of vascular dementia (this is more a perspective than a limit to your work in fact). Data are not available, but the authors have specified how to access them. Thank you again for this work, With kind regards, Michaël Rochoy, MD, PhD ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Incident prolonged QT interval in midlife and late-life cognitive performance PONE-D-19-23773R1 Dear Dr. Suemoto, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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In limitations of the study there is text in bold font "We did not have information" which is duplicate." Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript is well revised. Minor comment First sentence on third paragraph in P16, The phrase "We did not have information" was duplicated. Reviewer #2: The authors addressed all my comments. I have only minor comments. Please use same terminology for ECG (EKG vs ECG). In limitations of the study there is text in bold font "We did not have information" which is duplicate. Reviewer #3: Thanks to the authors for their clear and detailed answers. For me, this manuscript is now acceptable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Michiaki Nagai Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Michaël Rochoy |
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PONE-D-19-23773R1 Incident prolonged QT interval in midlife and late-life cognitive performance Dear Dr. Suemoto: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Stephen D. Ginsberg Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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