Peer Review History
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PGPH-D-25-02293 Prevalence and predictors of prediabetes/type 2 diabetes in adolescents in the United States: Data from NHANES (2021-2023) PLOS Global Public Health Dear Dr. Peprah Osei, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Global Public Health. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 29 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at globalpubhealth@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pgph/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does this manuscript meet PLOS Global Public Health’s publication criteria?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?-->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available (please refer to the Data Availability Statement at the start of the manuscript PDF file)??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The manuscript is well written and provides a timely update on risk factors for prediabetes and diabetes among a nationally representative sample of adolescents in the United States. I have the following comments for consideration prior to publication: Methods: 1) While I agree with the author that categorizing glucose status into “normal” and “prediabetes/diabetes” status allows for a more efficient analysis, I do not agree with the author’s statement that is allows for a more thorough analysis. In fact, I think grouping them in this way could hide meaningful differences in risk factors for prediabetes versus diabetes. 2) In a similar vein, I understand the purpose of grouping prediabetes/diabetes into one outcome due to the relatively small sample size. While separating the outcomes into “prediabetes” and “diabetes” would result in reduced statistical power, it could be an interesting sensitivity analysis to see if there are any unique risk factors for prediabetes and diabetes, respectively. 3) The author categorizes energy intake into four quartiles (<1396KCAL, 1396-1837.9KCAL, 1838-2388.9KCAL, >=2389 KCAL). Was there any consideration for whether the energy intake levels were appropriate for an individual’s age/sex? Perhaps the author could consider creating a category of consuming less than recommended KCAL, consuming recommended KCAL, consuming more than recommended KCAL, based on age and sex. 4) In the clinical and biochemical factors paragraph, the author writes “elevated BP is defined as SBP of 120-129 mmHg and DBP < 80mmHg”. This seems incorrect. 5) In the final paragraph of the methods, the author reports on collinearity and variance inflation factors. This should be in the results section under a “modeling assumptions” subsection. Results: 1) The author relies too heavily on p-values 2) The author provides p-values in Table 1 to evaluate whether there are statistically significant differences in baseline demographics. However, the use of p-values to evaluate such differences should be avoided and removed in alignment with guidelines from the American Statistical Association (https://amstat.tandfonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1080/00031305.2016.1154108 ) and the ICMJE (http://www.icmje.org/recommendations/browse/manuscript-preparation/preparing-for-submission.html). 3) Do not bold statistically significant results in a table, this can be misleading and result in readers overlooking potentially important or interesting findings. 4) The author reports that table 2 represents “weighted” prevalence but weighting is never discussed in the methods section. Please clarify how results were weighted. Additional comment from editor: The methods section should clearly indicate whether NHANES survey weights and design variables (sampling weights, strata, PSUs) were used in the analysis. If not, please justify this approach, as unweighted analyses may not yield representative or unbiased results. 5) When reporting results and stating differences between groups please report the prevalence rates for each group rather than the p-value to indicate meaningful difference. For example, “…adolescents with overweight/obesity and those with abdominal obesity showed significantly higher prevalence rates (36.4% and 36.7%, respectively” than their healthier-weight counterparts (X%)”. The p-value does not tell us anything about how clinically meaningful the prevalence difference is. 6) Similarly, when reporting results of logistic regression analysis please report confidence intervals instead of p-values. 7) It is interesting that the effect of BMI status reverses direction in the multivariate analysis (though the confidence interval overlaps with the univariate CI). The author should consider whether there is the potential for collider bias (https://jamanetwork.com/journals/jama/fullarticle/2790247) in the multivariate regression. Reviewer #2: This study analyzed data from 1,998 U.S. adolescents (10–19 years) from the National Health and Nutrition Examination Surveys (NHANES, 2021–2023) to determine the prevalence and predictors of prediabetes/type 2 diabetes. Key Findings The overall weighted prevalence of prediabetes or diabetes was a concerning 30.8%, meaning nearly 1-in-3 American adolescents has the condition. Prevalence Disparities: Prevalence was significantly higher in males (38.1%) compared to females (23.4%). Mexican American (33.6%) and Other Hispanic (33.3%) adolescents had the highest rates across racial/ethnic groups. Adolescents with overweight/obesity (36.4%) and abdominal obesity (waist-to-height ratio \ge 0.5) (36.7%) showed significantly higher prevalence. Predictors of Prediabetes/Diabetes Univariate Analysis found several significant associations: Lower odds: Older age (OR=0.93, p=0.045) and female gender (OR=0.50, p=0.001). Higher odds: Overweight/obesity (OR=1.57, p=0.012), elevated waist-to-height ratio (OR=24.04, p=0.002), total daily sugar intake (OR=1.003, p=0.042), low \text{HDL cholesterol} (\le 45 \text{ mg/dL}) (OR=1.41, p=0.032), higher systolic BP, and higher diastolic BP. Multivariate Analysis (after adjusting for confounders) identified three independent, significant predictors: Elevated Waist-to-Height Ratio (Central Adiposity): This emerged as the strongest independent predictor, with adolescents having over 146 times higher odds (AOR=146.19, p=0.004). BMI status, in contrast, lost significance in the multivariate model. Female Gender: Associated with lower odds (AOR=0.52, p=0.002) compared to males. Older Age: Associated with lower odds (AOR=0.91, p=0.025). Conclusion and Implications Nearly 1-in-3 American adolescents has diabetes or prediabetes. Male gender and younger age showed increased risk. The findings underscore that central adiposity, specifically measured by waist-to-height ratio, is a superior and independent predictor of prediabetes/diabetes compared to general overweight/obesity (BMI). This highlights the critical need for early screening and targeted prevention strategies that incorporate waist-to-height ratio into routine pediatric assessment, focusing on central adiposity and demographic risk factors ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] |
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Prevalence and predictors of prediabetes/type 2 diabetes in adolescents in the United States: Data from NHANES (2021-2023) PGPH-D-25-02293R1 Dear Mr Peprah Osei, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'Prevalence and predictors of prediabetes/type 2 diabetes in adolescents in the United States: Data from NHANES (2021-2023)' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Global Public Health. Before your manuscript can be formally accepted you will need to complete some formatting changes, which you will receive in a follow up email. A member of our team will be in touch with a set of requests. Please note that your manuscript will not be scheduled for publication until you have made the required changes, so a swift response is appreciated. IMPORTANT: The editorial review process is now complete. PLOS will only permit corrections to spelling, formatting or significant scientific errors from this point onwards. Requests for major changes, or any which affect the scientific understanding of your work, will cause delays to the publication date of your manuscript. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact globalpubhealth@plos.org. Thank you again for supporting Open Access publishing; we are looking forward to publishing your work in PLOS Global Public Health. Best regards, Doreen Larvie, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS Global Public Health *********************************************************** Reviewer Comments (if any, and for reference): |
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