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Well-written paper but no major novel contribution involved

Posted by gbrelles on 20 Feb 2013 at 02:23 GMT

The article by Alkawareek et al. on plasma-mediated inactivation of "Pseudomonas aeruginosa" biofilms is well-written and interesting. However, the only novelty of the article is the use of an in-house designed plasma jet. This said, atmospheric non-thermal plasma jets have been widely used by other research teams including my own. The approach and experimental design is correct but not new either. Biphasic survival curves and culturability (colony counting) studies have been used by many researchers. The use of either viability tests such as the LIVE/DEAD or different kind of microscopic approaches have also been used by some investigators. In fact, my group was pioneer in demonstrating the need to assess viability before making conclusions on the efficacy of plasma based only on culturability approaches. Alkawareek et al. present a very similar experimental design to the one we used in our 2009 paper (Joaquin, J. et al. Microbiology. 175: 724-732) which is referenced in their work.

Alkawareek et al.carried out an extensive literature search. However, they did not mention that the results they are presenting as novel were already reported by my group in 2010 and 2012 contributions (references below). I recognize that the authors might have not been aware of the 2012 contribution but they should have cited the first paper on atmospheric non thermal plasma jet inactivation of "Pseudmonas aeruginosa" biofilms.

Zelaya, A., Stough, G., Rad, N, Vandervoort, K., and Brelles-Mariño, G. 2010. "Pseudomonas aeruginosa" Biofilm Inactivation: Decreased Cell Culturability, Adhesiveness to Surfaces, and Biofilm Thickness upon High-Pressure Non-Thermal Plasma Treatment. IEEE Transactions on Plasma Science. 38 (2): 3398- 3403.
Zelaya, A., Vandervoort, K., and Brelles-Mariño, G. 2012. Battling Bacterial Biofilms with Gas Discharge Plasma. In: NATO Science for Peace and Security Series. « Plasma for bio-decontamination, medicine and food security » Machala, Zdenko; Hensel, Karol; Akishev, Yuri (Eds.), Springer. ISBN 978-94-007-2909-4, pp.135-148.

The authors stated (page 5) that “these results are superior to those reported for other atmospheric pressure plasmas jets”. Had the authors taken into account our paper, they would have realized that we reported a similar reduction in the number of biofilm-forming cells before a one-minute exposure time.

In addition, I would also like to comment on a couple of results presented by Alkawareek et al.

In the “bacterial growth inhibition zones” experiment (page 2), a control of the effect of the flow of gasses (plasma off) is missing. Some of the bacterial inhibition is simply due to the effect of dehydration produced by the gas. We observed cell/killing inactivation ranging from 5 to 100%, depending on the distance from the plasma source to the sample, when the plasma source was off and only gas was flowing. Therefore, without that control, the researchers cannot conclude that the inhibition is solely due to plasma.

Although the results related to the different operating plasma frequency are interesting, the authors recognize that the increase in frequency leads to an increase in the gas temperature. Therefore, the authors cannot conclude whether the increase in biofilm eradication is due to the change in frequency or to a combination of both frequency and temperature.

I hope the authors will find these comments useful.

No competing interests declared.

Rebuttal to gbrelles

brendangilmore replied to gbrelles on 08 Mar 2013 at 16:00 GMT

We are disappointed that Dr Brelles-Marino feels that her work was not given sufficient prominence in our recent publication in PloS One. We are aware of her contributions to this area of research and cite several of her publications in our paper.

However, we feel we have not made the broad based claims Dr Brelles-Marino seems to find within our paper. In our paper we make it very clear that we were completely focused on the use of kHz driven atmospheric plasma jets operating in He/O2 mixtures with low (~ 2l/min) gas flows and on interpreting our results in the context of the unique physical and chemical environments created in such jets. We therefore focused our referencing to address that environment.

Whilst we agree that we have used techniques in this paper, which Dr Brelles-Marino has also employed in her work, for any biofilm research group, such as ours, these are standard techniques, which are widely employed across the entire spectrum of our published biofilm research. Any suggestion that her group have ‘pioneered’ these techniques is misleading. Adopting appropriate standard techniques (which we correctly reference throughout and for which we make no claims of novelty) is a widely accepted, normal practice in such studies. We note several fundamental differences in our experimental set-up and, in our opinion; the comments made on the lack of novelty in our work are both incorrect and inappropriate.

Regarding the Zelaya et al., 2010 paper, which we are accused of ignoring, we found there only a very brief description of a commercial plasma jet device operating at 13.56 MHz in He/N2 at a flow rate of 20.4 L/min. There was no discussion of the nature of the jet. The plasma jet described in the reference to which the reader was directed (their reference 19) was of a completely different design to that described in Zelaya 2010. There was therefore insufficient information provided to allow us to assess the physical and chemical environment generated with that plasma jet and thus its relevance to our work. The biofilm growth models are also entirely different. We employ both a dedicated biofilm device (MBEC assay, an ASTM-approved method for biocide biofilm susceptibility testing) and a continuous flow biofilm growth chamber, and confocal laser scanning microscopy to establish 3-D images which illustrate extent and distribution of cell kill, biofilm thickness and effect of plasma exposure on the overall 3-D structure of the exposed biofilms.

It is also difficult to directly compare time-kill data between our study and that of Zelaya et al., 2010, since loss in viability is plotted as % survived cells on a normal-scale y-axis and so does not allow direct comparison of actual viable cell reduction. The term “almost 100% inactivation” makes comparison to our work difficult, since extent of reduction in viable count is impossible to assess. The lack of gas only control in this work also makes comparison of time-kill data difficult. One would fully expect that gas flow in excess of 20 L/min, (over ten times that used in our study), would physically remove a proportion of the biofilm resulting in apparent loss of viability, as noted by other groups in the field.

Finally, regarding Dr Brelles-Marino’s minor criticisms of our data interpretation: specifically, the lack of gas-only control for the bacterial growth inhibition zones experiment. We did not deem a gas-only control necessary in this experiment since we simply sought to visually define the extent (diameter) of the zone of bactericidal species generated, as we clearly stated. Nevertheless, we included the gas-only control in the Live/Dead-Confocal experiment (Fig. 7), observing negligible effects on P. aeruginosa viability over all exposure times tested. We wholeheartedly agree with Dr Brelles-Marino on the importance of appropriate gas-only controls, especially at high gas flow rates where mechanical removal of the biofilm is likely. Finally in response to the comment “the authors cannot conclude whether the increase in biofilm eradication is due to the change in frequency or to a combination of both frequency and temperature”. Perhaps it is worth stating that we did not attempt to make any such conclusion, nor to claim that the increased temperature alone was the cause of increased eradication rate, a point we addressed directly in our discussion. This is a subject of ongoing investigation in our group.

We hope these comments adequately address the criticisms and comments made by Dr Brelles-Marino regarding our work.

No competing interests declared.